Crit advice

So if you can imagine in someway my moving image will be bent on the walls

after considering the advice i received from my Crit from students and guests visiting from Unitec, AUT and Tautai I decided to really think about my next location in making the basis of my story to come alive.

Through some of my video the clip was misunderstood so I had to re think how i wanted to  e able to express my message, So i found that I could show the present moment with out using parts of my video. So not working would be the way I was trying to show a modern day I don't have to include technology to show that.

I think what was working would be the way the edited piece of work portrayed what i wanted to say and also how the clip showed on the wall bending in the middle.

With my new advice i have found new inspiration and encouragement that has really helped me so the next piece towards my work should be even better.  So when thinking about my video I wanted to be able to show the thoughts of water connection air earth and the connection to my life and lost cook island heritage.